*I received a copy of this book from The Zharmae Publishing Press in exchange for an honest review*
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Title: RealLies: A Zharmae Collection of Short Works
Edited by: Max Avalon
Year Published: 2013
Ashley's REVIEW of RealLies (Part I: Curiosity)
Ashley's REVIEW of RealLies (Part II: Control)
Synopsis: Enter a world where fantasy and reality collide, where seeking answers only raises more questions, and the paths you choose can change everything you have ever known. The pages in this collection will send you on an adventure into the unknown to discover the truth about yourself and the world around you.
Create and destroy destinies when facts and reasons fail in Robson's "Walk on By." Question reality with Lisabeth in "Onward Into Dark," where dreams come to life and the past returns to haunt those searching to escape the truth. Don't believe in escapism? Join the characters of Pike's "The Wolf of Descarta," as they face reality head-on and struggle against wild fantasies that eclipse life itself.
But be careful, our dear readers. One bite of "reality" and you might wish you could wrap the illusions around your eyes once more because as you will find, the truth lies.
Review: For this anthology, I'm just going to give a brief description and mini review for two of its stories.
Chasing the Shadow by Karen McCreedy
An asteroid is coming at the earth. We have colonies on the moon and Mars. The protagonist is an astronaut on the moon. The short story follows the process of them attempting to rescue the planet Earth from total destruction. There are a lot of stories like this out there. Armageddon is one if my favorites. I didn't find anything special with this short story. 2/5
The Ghost in the Sword by Wol-Vriey Jesuto
There is a magic sword. There is also a animal farmer who thinks he isn't manly enough. The man finds himself in a position in which he wants revenge. I thought this was going to be a fairy-tale with a moral, but I don't think it was. I'm confused as to what this story was telling. I didn't like the portrayal of women and physical features. I thought it was done to teach a lesson, but I must have not got the lesson. The imagery was very interesting though. I liked the concept if the afterlife presented. 3/5
-PAUL
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Thursday, September 26, 2013
RealLies: A Zharmae Collection of Short Works (Zharmae Anthology Series #1) - Ashley's Review (Pt. II - Control)
*I received a copy of this book from The Zharmae Publishing Press in exchange for an honest review*
Amazon | Barnes & Noble | Goodreads
Title: RealLies: A Zharmae Collection of Short Works
Edited by: Max Avalon
Year Published: 2013
My review of RealLies - Part I: Curiosity
Synopsis: Enter a world where fantasy and reality collide, where seeking answers only raises more questions, and the paths you choose can change everything you have ever known. The pages in this collection will send you on an adventure into the unknown to discover the truth about yourself and the world around you.
Create and destroy destinies when facts and reasons fail in Robson's "Walk on By." Question reality with Lisabeth in "Onward Into Dark," where dreams come to life and the past returns to haunt those searching to escape the truth. Don't believe in escapism? Join the characters of Pike's "The Wolf of Descarta," as they face reality head-on and struggle against wild fantasies that eclipse life itself.
But be careful, our dear readers. One bite of "reality" and you might wish you could wrap the illusions around your eyes once more because as you will find, the truth lies.
Review: Reviewing anthologies is always weird for me. Should I review all of the stories individually, or should I review the thing as a whole? Since this one is split into two sections, each containing 7 or 8 stories, I think I'll review the stories individually but collected in two parts. Yesterday, I posted my review for the stories in "Part I: Curiosity." Today, we have the stories from "Part II: Control!"
1. Crossroads of Sin by D.H. Aire: In this story, time and reality are threaded together to create a world where several timelines exist at once, and some must be sacrificed in order to save others. At least, I think that's what happens. This story was choppy and confusing and I really have no idea why things happened or what Xin was really trying to save. Something about aliens and Christopher Columbus? And why were there chapters in an 18 page story? This just was not my thing. 1/5
2. Walk on By by Jenny Robson: If you lived in a country where contraceptives were frowned upon and HIV ran rampant, what would you do if you found yourself with the disease? This story follows one woman as she exacts her revenge on the slime balls of the world for raping girls like her and giving them the virus. I think it's something that's a real issue and needs to be dealt with, and this short gives a pretty decent insight into what it might be like to live such a life and then be judged by "privleged" people. It was easy to follow and made me think, so a 3.5/5.
3. The Ghost Machine by Ellen Denton: This story tells about time travel and the impending destruction of the world via a virus aboard a meteorite destined to slam into the Mojave Desert. I actually enjoyed the first 3/4 of this story, and thought it was pretty well done. There was humor and sci-fi and believable characters. But then the ending was just meh and felt rushed or maybe just too convenient. We didn't really need to bring real ghosts into it, did we? Had the ending been done better, or maybe differently, I think I would have enjoyed it more. 4/5
4. Holofied by Mariev Finnegan: An aging gossip columnist who vlogs using futuristic technology finds herself pondering the meaning of life and love. And I really did not connect with her or her story at all. Everything was too convenient, and she just got on my nerves most of the time. And even though there's one event that's pivotal in Gloria's life and to the plot, I thought it was totally unnecessary that we had to relive it with her at least a dozen times. This story was way too long and kind of confusing and didn't hold my attention at all... I even found myself skipping ahead to try and get to something that I cared about reading. An interesting concept, but not well executed. 1/5
5. The Ghost in the Sword by Wol-Vrieg Jesuto: A magical sword, an animal farmer who is unsure of his masculinity, and a tale of revenge should all add up to make an excellent story, right? Well, this one starts out great - the sword and the reincarnation and afterlife and revenge all point towards a story with a moral. But then all of a sudden things get weird and I'm not sure what happens and I don't think there was any lesson. If this had gone in a different direction, I think it would have been much better. I think a 3/5 sounds reasonable?
6. Onward into Dark by Zach Lisabeth: I think this story is about a group of people being selected to go on a journey to another planet, but I'm not really sure. There's talk of a background check and characters deceiving those in charge and dreams, but I honestly have no idea what was going on. Besides that, it's not written poorly or anything... it isn't choppy or all over the place or anything. I think there might just be too much dialogue or too many flashbacks or something. A 1.5/5 because the plot is so unclear.
7. The Wolf of Descarta by Daniel Park: I'm pretty sure this story is about a virtual reality game/setting that can be played across planets in which Blamus/Jaren Reese pretends to be the Wolf Knight. Stories and books about virtual reality games have got to be really well done in order to catch my attention because Killobyte by Piers Anthony is one of my favorite books ever and kind of ruined other books with similar themes for me. I think this story has a lot of potential, but just seemed like a cheap copy of Killobyte. I think this story would be a lot better for anyone who hasn't read a good virtual reality book. Unfortunately, for me, it's a 3/5.
So, overall, this half of the anthology has an average of about 2.5/5. As a whole, I think this anthology really had potential but falls short with sloppy writing and stories that don't flow very well or capture the attention of the reader. I think there's an audience out there for these stories, but it just wasn't me. For me, sci-fi/fantasy stories (especially short ones) need to be able to grab my attention within the first couple of paragraphs, and it just didn't happen for me here. 2.5/5 for the whole collection.
--Ashley
Amazon | Barnes & Noble | Goodreads
Title: RealLies: A Zharmae Collection of Short Works
Edited by: Max Avalon
Year Published: 2013
My review of RealLies - Part I: Curiosity
Synopsis: Enter a world where fantasy and reality collide, where seeking answers only raises more questions, and the paths you choose can change everything you have ever known. The pages in this collection will send you on an adventure into the unknown to discover the truth about yourself and the world around you.
Create and destroy destinies when facts and reasons fail in Robson's "Walk on By." Question reality with Lisabeth in "Onward Into Dark," where dreams come to life and the past returns to haunt those searching to escape the truth. Don't believe in escapism? Join the characters of Pike's "The Wolf of Descarta," as they face reality head-on and struggle against wild fantasies that eclipse life itself.
But be careful, our dear readers. One bite of "reality" and you might wish you could wrap the illusions around your eyes once more because as you will find, the truth lies.
-----------------------------------
Review: Reviewing anthologies is always weird for me. Should I review all of the stories individually, or should I review the thing as a whole? Since this one is split into two sections, each containing 7 or 8 stories, I think I'll review the stories individually but collected in two parts. Yesterday, I posted my review for the stories in "Part I: Curiosity." Today, we have the stories from "Part II: Control!"
1. Crossroads of Sin by D.H. Aire: In this story, time and reality are threaded together to create a world where several timelines exist at once, and some must be sacrificed in order to save others. At least, I think that's what happens. This story was choppy and confusing and I really have no idea why things happened or what Xin was really trying to save. Something about aliens and Christopher Columbus? And why were there chapters in an 18 page story? This just was not my thing. 1/5
2. Walk on By by Jenny Robson: If you lived in a country where contraceptives were frowned upon and HIV ran rampant, what would you do if you found yourself with the disease? This story follows one woman as she exacts her revenge on the slime balls of the world for raping girls like her and giving them the virus. I think it's something that's a real issue and needs to be dealt with, and this short gives a pretty decent insight into what it might be like to live such a life and then be judged by "privleged" people. It was easy to follow and made me think, so a 3.5/5.
3. The Ghost Machine by Ellen Denton: This story tells about time travel and the impending destruction of the world via a virus aboard a meteorite destined to slam into the Mojave Desert. I actually enjoyed the first 3/4 of this story, and thought it was pretty well done. There was humor and sci-fi and believable characters. But then the ending was just meh and felt rushed or maybe just too convenient. We didn't really need to bring real ghosts into it, did we? Had the ending been done better, or maybe differently, I think I would have enjoyed it more. 4/5
4. Holofied by Mariev Finnegan: An aging gossip columnist who vlogs using futuristic technology finds herself pondering the meaning of life and love. And I really did not connect with her or her story at all. Everything was too convenient, and she just got on my nerves most of the time. And even though there's one event that's pivotal in Gloria's life and to the plot, I thought it was totally unnecessary that we had to relive it with her at least a dozen times. This story was way too long and kind of confusing and didn't hold my attention at all... I even found myself skipping ahead to try and get to something that I cared about reading. An interesting concept, but not well executed. 1/5
5. The Ghost in the Sword by Wol-Vrieg Jesuto: A magical sword, an animal farmer who is unsure of his masculinity, and a tale of revenge should all add up to make an excellent story, right? Well, this one starts out great - the sword and the reincarnation and afterlife and revenge all point towards a story with a moral. But then all of a sudden things get weird and I'm not sure what happens and I don't think there was any lesson. If this had gone in a different direction, I think it would have been much better. I think a 3/5 sounds reasonable?
6. Onward into Dark by Zach Lisabeth: I think this story is about a group of people being selected to go on a journey to another planet, but I'm not really sure. There's talk of a background check and characters deceiving those in charge and dreams, but I honestly have no idea what was going on. Besides that, it's not written poorly or anything... it isn't choppy or all over the place or anything. I think there might just be too much dialogue or too many flashbacks or something. A 1.5/5 because the plot is so unclear.
7. The Wolf of Descarta by Daniel Park: I'm pretty sure this story is about a virtual reality game/setting that can be played across planets in which Blamus/Jaren Reese pretends to be the Wolf Knight. Stories and books about virtual reality games have got to be really well done in order to catch my attention because Killobyte by Piers Anthony is one of my favorite books ever and kind of ruined other books with similar themes for me. I think this story has a lot of potential, but just seemed like a cheap copy of Killobyte. I think this story would be a lot better for anyone who hasn't read a good virtual reality book. Unfortunately, for me, it's a 3/5.
So, overall, this half of the anthology has an average of about 2.5/5. As a whole, I think this anthology really had potential but falls short with sloppy writing and stories that don't flow very well or capture the attention of the reader. I think there's an audience out there for these stories, but it just wasn't me. For me, sci-fi/fantasy stories (especially short ones) need to be able to grab my attention within the first couple of paragraphs, and it just didn't happen for me here. 2.5/5 for the whole collection.
--Ashley
Wednesday, September 25, 2013
RealLies: A Zharmae Collection of Short Works (Zharmae Anthology Series #1) - Ashley's Review (Pt. I - Curiosity)
*I received a copy of this book from The Zharmae Publishing Press in exchange for an honest review*
Amazon | Barnes & Noble | Goodreads
Title: RealLies: A Zharmae Collection of Short Works
Edited by: Max Avalon
Year Published: 2013
Synopsis: Enter a world where fantasy and reality collide, where seeking answers only raises more questions, and the paths you choose can change everything you have ever known. The pages in this collection will send you on an adventure into the unknown to discover the truth about yourself and the world around you.
Create and destroy destinies when facts and reasons fail in Robson's "Walk on By." Question reality with Lisabeth in "Onward Into Dark," where dreams come to life and the past returns to haunt those searching to escape the truth. Don't believe in escapism? Join the characters of Pike's "The Wolf of Descarta," as they face reality head-on and struggle against wild fantasies that eclipse life itself.
But be careful, our dear readers. One bite of "reality" and you might wish you could wrap the illusions around your eyes once more because as you will find, the truth lies.
Review: Reviewing anthologies is always weird for me. Should I review all of the stories individually, or should I review the thing as a whole? Since this one is split into two sections, each containing 7 or 8 stories, I think I'll review the stories individually but collected in two parts. So first, we have the stories collected under "Curiosity!"
1. Psycho Submersible by Oscar Francesco: This story deals with telepathy and the consequences of entering someone else's thoughts and subconscious. Although the idea is very interesting, and the realizations of the id, superego, and ego are very well done, this story just didn't do it for me. I had a hard time connecting with Jay, and the plot doesn't really flow very well. It's choppy and confusing and also kind of predictable. I'd give this a 2/5 for the concept though.
2. What Happened in the Library by Tucker Cummings: In this story, a young man named Fatu travels from Samoa to the university where his father studied in order to continue his father's research on medicinal uses for mold. Coincidentally, the books he studies are covered in mold from where they have been wter damaged and exposed to the elements and the mold gives Fatu weird visions. I thought it was interesting that both sides of mold are shown, but I didn't really connect with the characters and didn't really care about what happens to them. The story does flow pretty well and transitions nicely between dreams and reality though, so I would gives this one 3/5.
3. The Sea's Own by Madeleine Vaughn: Ships are being found without their crew, and a mysterious man offers his services to find out why. I actually enjoyed this story more than I thought I would. The world is very interesting, and I wish we had learned more, but it's well enough developed for this story. I'm also still very intrigued by Varyn, and I would definitely read more stories about him. I do think that the prologue and epilogue were a little unnecessary though, and that kind of ruined the whole flow of the main story for me. 3.5/5
4. Explorer by K.I. Borrowman: Set on another planet, this story tells the adventures of a man who travels to the other side of the planet to find out about the creatures that live there. There really wasn't too much mystery or intrigue or exciting plot twists, so it didn't really keep my attention very well. I did like the underlying message that you shouldn't believe everything you hear and that the only way to satisfy your own curiosity is to do something about it though. The world and the creatures were creative and had excellent descriptions. A 2.5/5 on this one.
5. The Mysterious Disappearance of Charlene Kerringer by Marlena Frank: Reading like an old detective novel (think film noir), this story tells of the disappearance of a baby girl, Charlene Kerringer. While it starts out like your typical detective story, it soon takes a sudden turn in a completely unexpected direction. Things get weird, but I actually enjoyed where they ended up. I'm still not sure why some things happened or what the point was, but it's nothing that's really important to this story I guess. This story is actually surprisingly well written too, so I think that helped. 4/5
6. Chasing the Shadow by Karen McCreedy: What would happen if an asteroid was barreling toward Earth and the only people who could stop it were out in space? That's what we find out in this story, in which a spaceship must collide with an asteroid in order to save humanity. While the concept is interesting, I didn't think it was well executed at all and found myself skimming over most of it. I didn't connect with any of the characters or care if their plan succeeded. I guess it just wasn't my cup of tea. 1/5
7. The Face of Entropy by Greg Leunig: We again find ourselves in space, but this time our characters are looking for a new planet after the destruction of Earth. This story deals a lot with the effects of entropy and chaos on everything in the universe, and tries to turn a scientific principle into a sort of creature. Again, an interesting concept, but I think this story was just too short. I wanted to know more about what happened on Earth and what the creatures were and what happens to all the people frozen in the pods. Since this story was lacking for me, I would give it a 2/5.
8. Book in Advance by Cathy Bryant: If you found a book that seemed like it was giving you a glimpse into your future, would you believe it? In this story, our protagonist Trish finds that things may not always be what they seem, and that maybe you shouldn't always believe everything you read. I think it was a very interesting concept, albeit a little far-fetched. Trish isn't really likable, and I never really felt bad for her or her situation. It's her own fault and she deserves what she gets. A 3/5 for this story.
So, overall, the first part of this anthology has an average of just over 2.5/5. I'm hoping the second part has stories that grab my attention more!
--Ashley
Amazon | Barnes & Noble | Goodreads
Title: RealLies: A Zharmae Collection of Short Works
Edited by: Max Avalon
Year Published: 2013
Synopsis: Enter a world where fantasy and reality collide, where seeking answers only raises more questions, and the paths you choose can change everything you have ever known. The pages in this collection will send you on an adventure into the unknown to discover the truth about yourself and the world around you.
Create and destroy destinies when facts and reasons fail in Robson's "Walk on By." Question reality with Lisabeth in "Onward Into Dark," where dreams come to life and the past returns to haunt those searching to escape the truth. Don't believe in escapism? Join the characters of Pike's "The Wolf of Descarta," as they face reality head-on and struggle against wild fantasies that eclipse life itself.
But be careful, our dear readers. One bite of "reality" and you might wish you could wrap the illusions around your eyes once more because as you will find, the truth lies.
-----------------------------------
Review: Reviewing anthologies is always weird for me. Should I review all of the stories individually, or should I review the thing as a whole? Since this one is split into two sections, each containing 7 or 8 stories, I think I'll review the stories individually but collected in two parts. So first, we have the stories collected under "Curiosity!"
1. Psycho Submersible by Oscar Francesco: This story deals with telepathy and the consequences of entering someone else's thoughts and subconscious. Although the idea is very interesting, and the realizations of the id, superego, and ego are very well done, this story just didn't do it for me. I had a hard time connecting with Jay, and the plot doesn't really flow very well. It's choppy and confusing and also kind of predictable. I'd give this a 2/5 for the concept though.
2. What Happened in the Library by Tucker Cummings: In this story, a young man named Fatu travels from Samoa to the university where his father studied in order to continue his father's research on medicinal uses for mold. Coincidentally, the books he studies are covered in mold from where they have been wter damaged and exposed to the elements and the mold gives Fatu weird visions. I thought it was interesting that both sides of mold are shown, but I didn't really connect with the characters and didn't really care about what happens to them. The story does flow pretty well and transitions nicely between dreams and reality though, so I would gives this one 3/5.
3. The Sea's Own by Madeleine Vaughn: Ships are being found without their crew, and a mysterious man offers his services to find out why. I actually enjoyed this story more than I thought I would. The world is very interesting, and I wish we had learned more, but it's well enough developed for this story. I'm also still very intrigued by Varyn, and I would definitely read more stories about him. I do think that the prologue and epilogue were a little unnecessary though, and that kind of ruined the whole flow of the main story for me. 3.5/5
4. Explorer by K.I. Borrowman: Set on another planet, this story tells the adventures of a man who travels to the other side of the planet to find out about the creatures that live there. There really wasn't too much mystery or intrigue or exciting plot twists, so it didn't really keep my attention very well. I did like the underlying message that you shouldn't believe everything you hear and that the only way to satisfy your own curiosity is to do something about it though. The world and the creatures were creative and had excellent descriptions. A 2.5/5 on this one.
5. The Mysterious Disappearance of Charlene Kerringer by Marlena Frank: Reading like an old detective novel (think film noir), this story tells of the disappearance of a baby girl, Charlene Kerringer. While it starts out like your typical detective story, it soon takes a sudden turn in a completely unexpected direction. Things get weird, but I actually enjoyed where they ended up. I'm still not sure why some things happened or what the point was, but it's nothing that's really important to this story I guess. This story is actually surprisingly well written too, so I think that helped. 4/5
6. Chasing the Shadow by Karen McCreedy: What would happen if an asteroid was barreling toward Earth and the only people who could stop it were out in space? That's what we find out in this story, in which a spaceship must collide with an asteroid in order to save humanity. While the concept is interesting, I didn't think it was well executed at all and found myself skimming over most of it. I didn't connect with any of the characters or care if their plan succeeded. I guess it just wasn't my cup of tea. 1/5
7. The Face of Entropy by Greg Leunig: We again find ourselves in space, but this time our characters are looking for a new planet after the destruction of Earth. This story deals a lot with the effects of entropy and chaos on everything in the universe, and tries to turn a scientific principle into a sort of creature. Again, an interesting concept, but I think this story was just too short. I wanted to know more about what happened on Earth and what the creatures were and what happens to all the people frozen in the pods. Since this story was lacking for me, I would give it a 2/5.
8. Book in Advance by Cathy Bryant: If you found a book that seemed like it was giving you a glimpse into your future, would you believe it? In this story, our protagonist Trish finds that things may not always be what they seem, and that maybe you shouldn't always believe everything you read. I think it was a very interesting concept, albeit a little far-fetched. Trish isn't really likable, and I never really felt bad for her or her situation. It's her own fault and she deserves what she gets. A 3/5 for this story.
So, overall, the first part of this anthology has an average of just over 2.5/5. I'm hoping the second part has stories that grab my attention more!
--Ashley
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